tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post7677718565979728698..comments2012-03-18T14:28:32.688-04:00Comments on Risky Fiction: Out of the BoxJoz Varlohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comBlogger61125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-18348596831407245572011-08-06T21:53:37.081-04:002011-08-06T21:53:37.081-04:00I'm just going to bow and this point and say I...I'm just going to bow and this point and say I agree with everyone before me. <br /><br />Fantastic!Anthony Deaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746700165087364279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-35657306651264096942011-08-06T21:44:58.114-04:002011-08-06T21:44:58.114-04:00Oh you cruel woman you! LOL The ending was a huge...Oh you cruel woman you! LOL The ending was a huge surprise - now I'm sitting here laughing. Well done!Helenhttp://helen-scribbles.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-18441063263451151742010-09-03T02:47:43.863-04:002010-09-03T02:47:43.863-04:00Travis;
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'...Travis;<br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed my twisted fairy tale. :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-27825509476772462682010-08-27T19:48:22.078-04:002010-08-27T19:48:22.078-04:00This. Is. Twisted.
I loved it! And that ending wa...This. Is. Twisted.<br /><br />I loved it! And that ending was so unexpected. Very creepy.Travis Kinghttp://rexscribarum.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-435626008222814292010-08-25T01:04:13.922-04:002010-08-25T01:04:13.922-04:00Thanks, Matt! Glad you like it! :DThanks, Matt! Glad you like it! :DJoz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-64412511549662212582010-08-24T23:00:06.721-04:002010-08-24T23:00:06.721-04:00Wow! You really nailed this one. Had me hooked thr...Wow! You really nailed this one. Had me hooked through the whole thing, and the ending was played perfectly.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-35634684550276955662010-08-24T14:44:05.872-04:002010-08-24T14:44:05.872-04:00Mari;
Thanks for the comment! Glad you liked it. ...Mari;<br /><br />Thanks for the comment! Glad you liked it. I'm not claustrophobic either, but this scares me a little, too. :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-19241397097139207892010-08-24T14:12:43.138-04:002010-08-24T14:12:43.138-04:00Gee, creepy, scary and breath taking. I'm not ...Gee, creepy, scary and breath taking. I'm not claustrophobic but reading your tale in this heat. uh To be proud indeed. ;)Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-91059107937769195992010-08-23T21:36:11.484-04:002010-08-23T21:36:11.484-04:00Cindy;
Thanks, lady. I really love the comments y...Cindy;<br /><br />Thanks, lady. I really love the comments you leave me. You and Jim are the Best Writer Friends, ever! :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-11425945909826478082010-08-23T21:34:14.834-04:002010-08-23T21:34:14.834-04:00Melissa;
I love taking something that's alrea...Melissa;<br /><br />I love taking something that's already known and putting dark twists on it. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! :DJoz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-32464924997635576502010-08-23T21:31:26.698-04:002010-08-23T21:31:26.698-04:00PJ;
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I'...PJ;<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I'm glad you liked it. :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-10242570916450685052010-08-23T21:11:05.380-04:002010-08-23T21:11:05.380-04:00Oh Maria, you're storytelling is amazing. You ...Oh Maria, you're storytelling is amazing. You had me freaking out with the dark, tight space and that hairy thingie crawling up his leg. His creepy, psycho dad with the jack in the box. (((Shudder)))Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-23016047600045049832010-08-23T14:15:20.053-04:002010-08-23T14:15:20.053-04:00Nothing like twisting a child's icon into some...Nothing like twisting a child's icon into something dark and disturbing. Those stories are always the best. :) Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-36075046740577288542010-08-21T23:50:30.545-04:002010-08-21T23:50:30.545-04:00Creepy indeed - "yikes" is all i can rea...Creepy indeed - "yikes" is all i can really say. Well done!PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-7855143964033019482010-08-21T21:25:09.208-04:002010-08-21T21:25:09.208-04:00antisocialbutterflie;
Thanks for stopping by, rea...antisocialbutterflie;<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by, reading & commenting on my little sick & twisted flash. Glad you enjoyed. :D<br /><br />brainhaze;<br /><br />Yes, Geppetto needs a long-armed white jacket and some padded walls I think. Thanks for the wonderful comment. Glad you liked it! :)<br /><br />Rachel;<br />Thanks for the wonderful comment. Glad you liked reading my creepy version of Pinocchio. ;)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-14772505955410499232010-08-21T17:54:36.664-04:002010-08-21T17:54:36.664-04:00Wow Maria! Great story. I love it. It was perfectl...Wow Maria! Great story. I love it. It was perfectly creepy throughout.Rachel Blackbirdsonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02246966713076881105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-46422798140965880312010-08-21T17:41:50.529-04:002010-08-21T17:41:50.529-04:00LOL - you had me very confused there but it all ma...LOL - you had me very confused there but it all makes sense now - Geppetto needs help!!!<br />Brilliant workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-478609795994206782010-08-21T17:38:43.876-04:002010-08-21T17:38:43.876-04:00Woo boy! This one was definitely creepy and I love...Woo boy! This one was definitely creepy and I loved it.<br /><br />Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-1905600045952839102010-08-21T14:47:36.198-04:002010-08-21T14:47:36.198-04:00Maria;
Thanks for reading and commenting. I like ...Maria;<br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting. I like twisted stuff, too. Currently working on bending the hell out of a pop song from the early 70's. I'm glad you liked it! :)<br /><br />Kevin;<br />Thanks for the comment. Yea, being shut up with a hairy mole cricket is not my idea of a good time, either. Glad you liked it! :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-59053285082057369752010-08-21T14:40:45.637-04:002010-08-21T14:40:45.637-04:00Creepy!
The whole idea of being in a box, let alo...Creepy!<br /><br />The whole idea of being in a box, let alone with some creepy-crawly, freaks me out.<br /><br />Good one.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-26586906539991628342010-08-21T08:38:41.824-04:002010-08-21T08:38:41.824-04:00haha - excellent! I like my fairy tales twisted to...haha - excellent! I like my fairy tales twisted too, and this was nice and scary to boot. In short - delectable!mazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-64223800343608557942010-08-20T21:41:36.488-04:002010-08-20T21:41:36.488-04:00ganymeder;
I like screwing around with children&#...ganymeder;<br /><br />I like screwing around with children's stories and all other kinds of pop culture stuff. My thing is, "If they build it (or write it) I'll twist the crap out of it!) <br /><br />Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by! :D<br /><br />Nomar;<br /><br />Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it!<br /><br />Janet;<br /><br />Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it. :DJoz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-67700193833831292062010-08-20T20:45:02.359-04:002010-08-20T20:45:02.359-04:00Whoa! The twist was a kicker, you see ... that was...Whoa! The twist was a kicker, you see ... that was some ending. And some reveal. Poor Pinocchio, and poor Jiminy. <br /><br />Great work!Janet Lingel Aldrichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05633969913976791146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-81238447406012679952010-08-20T18:48:26.196-04:002010-08-20T18:48:26.196-04:00Outstanding! Well Done!Outstanding! Well Done!Silent Screams: A Blog About Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15545989854023945226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5266596331001914484.post-33669917446243468712010-08-20T18:05:26.385-04:002010-08-20T18:05:26.385-04:00OMG, the awesomeness of this cannot be overstated....OMG, the awesomeness of this cannot be overstated. I love, love, LOVE screwing around with children's stories! <br /><br />Great work!Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.com