Mercy at the Gates—from Chapter 1 of "The Mages of Morrow"

This is an excerpt from the fantasy novel I was writing for NaNoWriMo. I won Nano on 11/29 with 50,100 words. It is not edited, so there will be improvement on it somewhere down the road. Also, this is a fantasy meant to take adults back in time to the stories of their youth, in a modern re-telling. That said be aware there is profanity and sexual situations. It is Rated R by my standards. You can read the first two intros here: Prelude: Boy at the Edge of the World and Part 1: Spinnerlands, if you like. 

Mercy sat at the gates. 

She was taking a break from the chaos that was the Good Man's Rest. She watched Domus welcome people in and out of the city. Why the village of Crope employed the Arctodus to watch it's gates was a mystery. They were so far north that there was no threat here of dragons (not that Mercy believed in dragons, she didn't) or other pre-history beasts. She wasn't sure she believed in pre-history beasts either. Ruby told her that Domus was a pre-history beast, but to Mercy he just looked like an ordinary grizzly bear, if a little on the gigantic size. 

The major difference was speech. 

When she first came to Crope and people told her about the dragons and beasts that could talk, she thought they were all crazy. This is before the town hired Domus. 

Then, one day, as she was sitting on the stoop of the inn, a cat came up to her. It meowed gently and she stroked it's fur. 

"I'm sorry. I don't have any food to give you right now, but I'll sneak some later, if you're still around."

"What time?" the cat said. 

Mercy jumped off the stoop and nearly choked on her tongue. From that time on, she encountered many domestic animals that could speak and some that could not. She asked Lovely Lucy about it one day when they were in the kitchen preparing meals for the evening crowd. Mercy paused in the midst of her corn-shucking. 

"Why can some animals talk and some can't?"

Lucy scoffed at her. "How the 'ell do I know? Get your ass back to work!"

Clem, one of the regular patrons of the Good Man's, leered at Mercy and grinned. Mercy shivered. She hated being around the man. He was always making passes, or trying to grab her in places on her anatomy where she preferred not to be grabbed. He winked at her. "Some animals were created smart, by the mages, like. Such as dragons and some domesticated animals. And some weren't. Like chickens. I mean, who wants to hear a chicken bitchin' at yeh when yeh go to chop it's head off!"

Mercy shook her head. "But I've seen some cats and dogs that can talk in Crope and some that can't. Why is that?"

"Cherry-girl, you got more questions than a constable!" Clem turned and stumbled off in the direction of the tavern.

Lucy looked angrily at Mercy, her thin, aging lips pressed tightly together. Sensing a beating coming, Mercy quickly continued shucking. After awhile she decided to try her luck with Lucy again.

"Lucy? Why can some tame animals talk and some can't?"

Lucy looked up, glaring. "You stupid thing. Don't you know anything about the world?"

Mercy wanted to say that, No, since she was not originally from this world, she didn't know. But Lucy had never believed that she was not from some far off village to the north of Crope and got violently angry when Mercy tried to explain, so she kept her mouth shut. 

Silence proved to be golden, because Lucy seemed to soften a bit. "Well, it's like Clem said. Some were created to talk by the mages."

"But what about the ones that can't talk?" Mercy asked. 

Lucy looked away as she replied, "They be the crossovers, like."

Like me, Mercy thought. But she knew better to say this to Lovely Lucy, who was really not as lovely as her nickname suggested. 

"Hey, girlie!"

Mercy jerked her head up, her reverie interrupted. Domus looked down from his stool, a very large stool considering his gargantuan size. His muzzle was a grizzled gray, indicating that he was no longer in the prime of his life...still, he had enough pep left to guard the gates of Crope during the daylight hours. He retired to a hut beside the gates after his shift. Why he was kept so close to the gates after dark Mercy could not understand. The gates were never closed and the giant Arctodus slept like a....well, like a bear. Regardless of his size, Mercy found the bear to be nicer than most of the humans she'd met in Crope. She took care not to get too close to him, however. The two-inch talons on his forepaws could slice your face off as neat as a paring knife. He wouldn't mean it, of course. But he was, like all his kind, as dumb as a door-pull. 

She looked at him questioningly. 

"Shouldn't ye be gettin' back to yonder inn? Yeh don't want ol' Lucy to come lookin' fer ye." 

Mercy realized that she had spent more than her allotted break time out by the gates, head drenched in thoughts and memories that did nothing but depress her even more than she already was. She jumped up from the step outside Domus' hut (a step tall enough to be a seat for an average human girl) and hightailed down the street toward the inn, just a few feet away. 

She entered the bar, gave her eyes a few moments to adjust to the dim light (it was always dark in the bar) and made her way toward the kitchen. She held her breath and hoped the kitchen was unoccupied. She'd been able to work in relative peace during the morning as Lucy had slept in, nursing a hangover. 

As she stepped into the kitchen, a pair of strong arms reached out and grabbed her. 

Clem had been hiding behind the door. 

He pulled her close and ran his hand up her waist to pinch one of her nipples. She tried not to show how much it hurt, because pain only made Clem more excited. She felt his breath on the back of her neck and smelled the reek of Burr whiskey, which was stronger than any made back home. In the corner of the kitchen, Lucy laughed menacingly. 

"Is today the day, Little Cherry?" Clem breathed. Mercy stifled the urge to vomit. 

She looked at Lucy, hoping the woman would intervene for once. She didn't. 

Instead, Lucy reached into her dress pocket and pulled out a long, thin needle. 

Mercy jerked out of Clem's grasp and scrambled to the center of the kitchen.

"This past week was not my birthday," Mercy sighed, although she knew she was wasting her breath. She had made the same statement every time since she arrived here, but Lucy wouldn't believe her. And rightly so, for Mercy had no intention of telling anyone in Crope when her birthday was. It was bad enough that she had told them she was sixteen, when she first arrived, so many months ago. 

"Well, damnit girl," Lucy replied, her voice rough as rocks. "You gotta have a birthday soon. Year's almost up. Soon it'll be the Harvester Moon, then the Cold Time. After that is Year's End."

Clem grinned from the doorway. "A man can't wait forever."

Lucy swung around to confront him. "You will damn well wait! Or be hanged. And won't nobody be able to he'p it. You know the law." 

"Curses to the Lars-damned law!" Clem spat. 

"You'll obey the law or I'll be th' one throws the lever on yer gallows! The girl is my property."

"I'm nobody's property. I'm a free person!" Mercy shouted. Some days she just could not hold her temper, especially on Finger-Pricking days when she had to endure Lucy referring to her as 'property.' She now knew how the slaves in the early days back in her world felt. She felt angry, and when she felt angry she got rebellious, and that was not a good state to be in when Lucy was around. Lucy rushed forward and Mercy felt the sting of a slap on her face. But she did not cry. She learned the hard way a long time ago not to give Lucy and Clem that satisfaction. It only made things worse. Instead, she did the second worse thing. She stared defiantly into Lucy's face. Lucy grabbed Mercy's hand and stabbed the needle in her middle finger hard. 

Finally, the tears began to flow as Lucy pulled out the needle and squeezed Mercy's fingertip ruthlessly. The blood pooled and began to slide down her finger. 

Lucy grabbed a small, thimble-like glass containing a measure of clear liquid from the counter. She held Mercy's throbbing finger over the vial until one drop of blood splashed down into the liquid, which immediately turned blue. The first time she'd underwent the Finger-Pricking test she'd been reminded of a pregnancy test. Except this was not a pregnancy test. It was an age test. How the substance in the thimble could tell Mercy was not seventeen, she did not know. It apparently involved magick, because Lucy purchased the potion from a local Sage. What she was told was that on the day when her blood caused the liquid to turn green would be the day she would be turned over to Clem for "training" in the Good Man's Inn main business: prostitution. 

Mercy breathed a sigh of relief and Lucy slapped her again. "Damn you, girl! Name the day!"

Mercy cast her eyes downward, not wanting to be hit again. She was afraid she would have a bruise already. She was silent, however. 

Lucy roughly shoved her toward the back staircase. "Go clean rooms, worthless virgin!" 

Mercy bounded up the stairway, giving full sway to her tears, the cackling laughter of Lucy and Clem in her ears. 

What she wouldn't tell them...she couldn't tell them. 

She had forgotten her birthday. 

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Mercy at the gates. Waiting. Looking for a way out. She attempted to catalogue in her memory the faces of all the Spinners she saw, so that if she saw them again, she could ask them—no, beg them—to take her out. To take her anywhere but here. She put the foolish fantasy of home to rest a long time ago. She knew in her heart she would never go home again. At night, in her room, she dreamed of Santa Claus and Jell-o pudding. She sang in her sleep:

"I'm a Pepper, You're a Pepper, He's a Pepper, She's a Pepper..."

And sometimes she cried in her sleep, too. 

The Mages of Morrow—Part 1: The Spinnerlands (epigraph)

Would you tell me, please, which way I ought to go from here?' 

'That depends a good deal on where you want to get to,' said the Cat.

'I don't much care where —' said Alice.

'Then it doesn't matter which way you go,' said the Cat

'But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.

'Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: 'we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad.'

'How do you know I'm mad?' said Alice.

'You must be,' said the Cat, 'or you wouldn't have come here.'

-Lewis Carroll, Through the Looking Glass

The Mages of Morrow—Prelude: Boy at the Edge of the World

There was an old quarry down by the stream. 

It wasn't a large quarry, but it was large enough for the purpose it served. 

Pure Sagestone, so clear you could almost see through a three-foot brick of it, was mined there. 

It was not mined as a diamond would be, no. Sagestone was useful only to those few who knew how to shape it properly and then call forth images from it. It was not called Sagestone for nothing. 

The elder man in the quarry wasn't known as a Sage. It was a secret he chose to keep. His small dwelling was only a few miles from a powerful Mage, and he did not want that kind of trouble. He had the boy to think about. 

The boy was with him this day. He had not gone to the stream to fish, or to skip rocks on its calm surface, as he normally did when his uncle continued his never-ending search for the perfect seeing-stone. 

Instead he had come to the quarry with his uncle. 

The old man cursed and hauled stone after stone out of the earth and tossed them aside. 

"Ah'll find ye yet," he mumbled irritably. 

The boy picked up first one of the stones his uncle discarded (which he also quickly chucked away) and then another. As he bent over, his shorts rode up his leg and the sunlight shone on what appeared to be an odd-shaped tattoo on the side of his upper right thigh. 

"What you lookin' for, boy?" his uncle asked. 

"A seeing-stone for me," he replied. 

His uncle straightened up and looked curiously at the lad, a sly smile played at the corner of his wrinkled mouth. 

"Aye. Are ye gonna shape and polish it yerself, then?"

"Aye," the boy said simply and hunkered over again to continue his search, digging in some places with his bare hands. 

His uncle watched him for a few minutes, then bent his own back to the pickax again. His thoughts were complicated and troubled. 

Is it time already? he thought to himself. 

He left the quarry that day empty-handed again, but the boy had a prize. His uncle scoffed when he saw it; a clear but imperfect stone with what appeared to be two hollow bubbles of the exact same size in its depths. But the boy was well pleased. After supper, he took the awkward looking rock immediately to the workshop to begin shaping it. 

His uncle came in after a time to watch and advise him. His mind was still wondering. 

He is so small, still. So young. 

"Turn it, like so..." he said, gently taking the boys hand and guiding his efforts. 

So young. But even the smallest stone can cause a mighty ripple in the stream, if it is cast hard enough. 

Click on the text to read the epigraph to Part 1: The Spinnerlands

The Lust, The Flesh (an excerpt from Zombie Nation: St. Pete)

This week I'm sharing with you an excerpt of my story "The Lust, The Flesh" which appears in the local zombie anthology, "Zombie Nation: St. Pete." You can purchase the anthology here: Zombie Nation Publishing. I'll be having a contest in the future to give away a couple of copies of the book. I'm open for suggestions about how to do the contest and have received some wonderful ideas already. Please feel free to post your suggestion here: Contest Ideas.

I looked for Hollis among the animated corpses. He was near the end, munching on somebody's big toe. 

I repressed a gag and called his name.

He turned a wound-covered, pepperoni-pizza face to me. His eyes were still clear blue; they hadn't yet taken on that milky glaze of the undead.

"Christine! Will you join us? We're taking over!" 

"No, Hollis." 

Pink-tinged tears fell from his eyes, and were absorbed into the rotting flesh beneath. I walked alongside Hollis, keeping pace with the marchers, but keeping my distance as well. There was a man in a black suit on the other side of Hollis. He was mumbling to himself. 

I looked at Hollis. He was definitely crying. What the fuck? 

"...the wages of sin is death," murmured the Man in Black. He sneezed, spraying bloody snot all over the back of the zombie in front of him. The newly painted Jackson-Pollock-canvas didn't even flinch. 

"I love you, Christine! I want to marry you."

Highlight of my life. A proposal from a zombie. 

"You're a zombie, Hollis. You don't love anything except flesh and brains," I said.

The Man in Black lurched, as if my words caused him pain.

"The lust! The flesh!" he shouted.

"What's his dealio?" I asked. 

"He was a preacher,” Hollis said. “Practicing for Sunday's sermon when we busted into his church. He's still trying to preach, I guess."

I nodded. A fresh one. It seemed the newer the zombie, the more they held onto to their former selves. It was the passage of time that rotted the zombies’ grey matter. Hollis had only been reanimated a few days ago. Still, he seemed more lucid than the preacher.

"Hollis, what started this?"

Hollis shook his head. His eyes glazed over—I thought for a moment I was losing him—but they cleared, baby-blue again and he seemed okay. 

"Remember that festival awhile back? Zombie Fest? Well, there was a real zombie from California here and he infected someone."

California. That figures. Damn tourists always causing trouble.  

"A real zombie, Christine!" Hollis looked like an excited kid on Christmas; an undead kid with putrid, maggot-infested flesh.  

#

We were headed towards downtown. A crowd gathered, lining both sides of the street. If there were cars ahead of us, they quickly got out of the way, even on U.S. 19, where traffic stopped for no man.

The spectators began to jeer and throw things. Not a smart thing to do, in my opinion. "Go back where you came, you undead bastards!" a male voice yelled. 

And just where might that be? None of them had been buried, so the only thing they could return to would be their normal, living state—and that sure as hell wasn't going to happen. Here were people bitten and infected with a plague. From California. I laughed. Eighty percent of the population there are brain-dead anyway.

A zombie a few rows ahead of us dashed out of his line and grabbed the man from the sidewalk. The man struggled, but it was no use. The plague caused those stricken to have superhuman strength; especially when they were pissed off.  

The crowd screamed as the zombie bit into the struggling man's neck, severing his carotid. Blood spewed from the open wound. The man jerked twice…and then was still. I turned away just as the zombie lowered his head and began to feed. Hollis craned his head to watch, which disturbed me greatly. 

"Where are we going, Hollis?"

"We're goin' straight to hell, where old serpent Satan flaps his wings, to fan the flames of our destruction!"

"Cool it, padre," I said. "It'll be okay," He looked over and rolled his eyes at me as if to say 'Don't bullshit me, sister.'

A woman's voice rose amongst the spectators.  "I hope they kill every stinkin' one of you, zombie freaks!" Some of them held hastily crafted cardboards signs. One in particular read: "Leeve Our Branes Alone!" That one made me grimace. 

“The stupid always survive,” I grumbled. 

Hollis hadn't heard a word I'd said. He was drooling, still trying to watch the zombie buffet. I tugged his bloody shirt sleeve, and his head snapped back; he looked at me with an eerie calm. I shivered and hoped he didn't notice.

"I asked you where we're going."

"Uh, I dunno...hang on." 

Hollis tapped the shoulder of a female zombie in front of him. She was missing an ear and her nose was decayed to a pulpy mass. 

"Do you know where we're going?"  

"Coast Guard.” 

"Why are you going to the Coast Guard?" I asked, but I had an awful feeling I knew. 

Hollis again reached to tap No-Ear Woman. I pulled him back. 

"Never mind." 

Scanning the horde, I wondered who the mastermind might be, if there was such a being. I thought about asking Hollis, but he didn't seem to know much about the plans of his brethren, if there were any. 

I guess I knew then that I couldn't save Hollis. There was no cure for this plague, and by the time the government got around to doing anything, the whole state, from Key West to Tallahassee, would either be dead or undead. The thought brought tears to my eyes.  I had loved what used to be the man walking next to me. But I also knew I couldn't let him, or the others, transform me. I wasn't ready to put brains on my list of gourmet delicacies, so I had to take care not to get bitten. I still don’t know where the disease came from. Maybe some shit-head scientist fresh out of UC-Berkeley woke up one day and thought, "Geez, I'm bored...I think I'll create a zombie virus. Yeah, that would be cool!"

A shout from the crowd cut through my daydreaming. It was aimed at me.

"Whatcha doin' with them monsters, girl? You a zombie lover!!!" He was big, like an eighteen-wheeler with legs. He stuck a middle finger up in our direction. 

"Shut the fuck up, man!" Hollis shouted. 

"Make me, you friggin' corpse!" 

I couldn’t understand why these people came out to taunt an army of zombies. Hollis tried to get past me and lunge for Mack-Truck, but I pulled him back. Another zombie broke from the crowd and went for him, but he wasn’t alone. Two men were with him, and all three were armed: Mack-Truck had a tire iron; the other two had Louisville Sluggers. Mack swung the tire iron, and it connected with a loud crack. The zombie went down. It was dead, but the men continued to beat it into a lumpy, fleshy mass oozing on the concrete, not hard considering the fact that this zombie was already rapidly decaying. 

We continued the march. As we neared the police station, I became anxious. There were police cars parked at the station, but I couldn’t see any officers in the crowd. 

A shadow appeared at my side. I glanced up into another pair of living eyes. 

It was Kevin. 

Kevin worked in the same office I did. He was extremely shy and extremely unpopular. No one talked to Kevin unless they had to and Kevin, likewise, spoke only when spoken to. He was an efficient, hard worker. Therefore, the other employees were continually seeking ways to get him fired. I never understood why it was that slackers always wanted to see the people doing the work get fired. Hell, it was because of them that they got to slack off. 

"Hello, Christine," Kevin said, smiling. I had never notice that he had such a nice smile; probably because I'd never seen him smile before. 

I had also never seen him outside of the office. His casual attire was very different than the business suits he wore to work. He was dressed in blue jeans, a faded Lightning shirt and a black, leather motorcycle jacket, which set off his wavy brown hair and blue eyes. 

Damn! Kevin was hot!

"Um...Hi." 

"Sorry about your boyfriend," he said.

"Thanks." 

I was suddenly aware of Hollis stiffening at my side. My jealous zombie boyfriend. 

"Er...Hollis? This is Kevin. He works with me."

Hollis glared. 

"Idle hands are the tools of the devil!" Preacher barked. 

Kevin shrugged. "I think it's horrible what they're doing."

This seemed to satisfy Hollis, but not me. I looked at Kevin. He read the question in my eyes.

Kevin leaned over. 

"When we get to the fences, veer off with me and prepare to haul ass," he whispered.

"Why?" I asked. 

He looked wary. "Just be prepared.”

“Do you know why they want to get to the Coast Guard?”

"Well, they just can't go shambling into Tampa International Airport now, can they?" 

He had a point.

Contest Ideas

I am having a contest sometime in the future to give away copies of "Zombie Nation: St. Pete," the local zombie anthology featuring writers from my area. My story, "The Lust, The Flesh" is on page 179.

I've gotten a couple of really great suggestions for this contest so far.

Jim Bronyaur would like to see an excerpt of this story (which I've posted for #fridayflash this week) and then a Story Starter: a paragraph into another story which contestants would finish. I think this is a good idea.

Icy Sedgwick has another great idea. She would like me to post all of my story (I'd have to do it in parts, it's no flash story) and then contestants would pick a character from my story (a victim or survivor) and write a flash in that character's POV.

Please leave a comment as to how this contest should run. 

For more information about "Zombie Nation: St. Pete," visit this website: Zombie Nation Publishing. 

In print...finally...

Yesterday I went to the mailbox and was delighted to find that my copy of "Oh, the Horror!" by Static Movement had arrived.

This anthology of short horror tales is the first printed book where my work appears that is sold by distributors (Pill Hill Press for now, eventually Amazon).

I can't begin to express in words how giddy I was when I opened the book and saw my two flash stories, "Out of the Box," and "Telescope Moment" listed on the Table of Contents page as being on pages 78 and 82 respectively.

Then I went to those pages in the book and stared at them for a good, long while, trying to fathom my feelings about seeing my work in a book.

Don't anybody pinch me.

I might wake up.

A post about upcoming posts...

It's been awhile since I posted any news on my blogs.

It's not that juicy news hasn't been happening, it's just that I've been buried up to my eyeballs in schoolwork and this is a scenario that is not likely to change anytime soon.

I have a couple of items I want to post about concerning upcoming stories of mine that are being published (think zombies, ghosts and a meteor strike).

The biggest news is my story 'The Lust, The Flesh' has been accepted for publication in the upcoming local anthology 'Zombie Nation: St. Pete.' I am working on a post with various news items and links about this project that could be a big step forward in my writing career.

I have other publication news to share also in that upcoming post. I'm working furiously between school studies trying to put together this post and another one, about a special memorial service that my husband's family had for him in Massachusetts last month.

About my college career. I attended an orientation meeting Monday afternoon for the Phi Theta Kappa International Honor Society. I signed up to be a new member. Looking forward to the academic benefits of being a member of that organization.

These last couple days has been all about me joining organizations. Last Thursday, I became a two-year member of the Florida Writers Association, another group that is sure to benefit me greatly.

The future is looking very bright.